Mii+True+Feelings

This is a poem called "Mii True Feelings" by a student at B-H-L Middle School. The author of this poem talks anout her true feelings towards someone who I decided is special to her based on the text.

This poem has five short stanzas. there are two lines per stanza and the poem is free verse. The poem also rhymes and the rhyme scheme is AA, BB, CC, DD. For example, in the first stanza the last words are //express//, and then //nevertheless//. In the second stanza, the last words are //feelin'// and //ceilin'.// In the third stanza, the last words are //them// and //them//. And finally, in the last stanza, the last words of the two lines are //leave// and //me.// The poem doesn't include and figurative language. I think that the purpose of the poem is to express one's true feelings for someone. In the line ending in //ceilin'//, it makes me think of something in a room hitting the ceiling. I think that the author is saying that the feelings are very powerful and she doesn't the feelings to go away. My personal response to the poem is that I really like it and I think that it's cool.

Even though she cannot explain the feelings because they're new, she likes them and I think it gives the author a new view or perspective. The feelings are very special. The main thing in this poem is rhyme. I think that people in the same age group as the author can relate to this poem. I personally cannot relate to this poem This poem makes people think....

~//Bri//